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Post by Hay-Lin on Oct 8, 2008 18:32:35 GMT -6
Okay, I have to make another thread for the writing so it won't be crazy and such.
Yes I know everyone hates rules, but where is a community without a set of rules?
I like to thank Su Lu Pi for her advice. Thanks!
1) Make sure it is appropriate for the readers, it can't be all you-know-what and you-know-who's okay? At least keep it PG-13 okay?
2) It doesn't have to be correct grammar, but we all want to be able to read it alright?
3) Make sure that you don't go over-board on the fight scenes guys.
4) Let your imagination explore it's dark unknown depths!
5) Have fun with it! It can so fun to let everything go and just write!
Here's how it should go:
Genre: Horror, Comedy, Romance, Angst, ect. Ratings: Teen, Older Teen (OT) , G, ect. Title: What your title is.
Then start your story okay? Good, then write guys! I'm rooting for you guys!
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Post by Hay-Lin on Oct 8, 2008 19:18:17 GMT -6
Genre: Comedy/Romance Rated: G Title: Cookies
Xiao Qiao looked anxiously at the cookie jar. It's contents were almost empty except for one cookie.
'Ohhh! I want it! But Sis says it's bad to have a cookie before dinner!' She frowned as she awaited the bell for dinner.
'Who cares what Sis says?' I'm getting that cookie!' She carefully grabbed the cookie out of the jar and she suddenly dropped it.
"Opps." She said to herself. She bent over to pick it up until......"Xiao Qiao what are you doing?" The light haired girl looked behind her and saw her husband, Zhou Yu look at her funny.
She quickly picked it up. "N-nothing! It's nothing! Nothing at all!" She smiled nervously and she swayed back and forth.
Zhou Yu raised his eyebrows, "Really? Are you sure?" Xiao Qiao nodded. "Well, alright then. I'll be in the study with Sun Ce, okay?" His wife nodded and said,"Yeah! You go ahead and study!" She then pushed the latter towards the door.
"Wha-What? Xiao Qiao? What's up with you?" He saw her blush and again she said it was nothing. Zhou Yu smirked and quickly behind her back to find a cookie in her hands.
"Ah-ha! So that's why you were so nervous!" "G-Give me that Zhou Yu! It's mine!" She reached out and tried to grab it but with no chance.
"You know your sister has a rule against you with sweets." Xiao Qiao blushed, "I know, she has a rule for everything! It's not fair!" Then she heard her husband laugh. She blushed again.
"What's so funny?! I just wanted a cookie! That's all!" She glared at her husband who stopped laughing and smiled.
"Da Qiao has very good reasons for you not to eat sweets, you know that." Xiao Qiao nodded,"Okay I won't eat it then." Then she felt a small piece of the cookie go into her mouth.
"I guess a little cookie wounldn't hurt anyone right?" Zhou Yu smiled again when he saw his wife blush. She smiled back. "I guess not!" They ate the cookie together as husband and wife.
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Post by britney on Oct 8, 2008 20:31:02 GMT -6
Fantastic!
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Post by Hay-Lin on Oct 8, 2008 20:34:22 GMT -6
Thank you! You can make one too you know? I would love to read your stories!
Readers, please write stories! It helps the mind!
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Post by britney on Oct 8, 2008 20:44:56 GMT -6
I'm working on one know, I'll get it posted maybe tomorrow
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Post by Hay-Lin on Oct 8, 2008 20:47:53 GMT -6
okay! I can't wait!
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Post by Hay-Lin on Oct 8, 2008 21:58:14 GMT -6
Genre: General/ Romance Rating: T Title: OMG! They did what?!
Da Qiao was watching her husband studying, which was very unusual of him. "What are you studying my Lord?" He looked up and said," Just battle stuff."
Da Qiao smiled," Really? Are you sure you aren't goofing off?" She leaned over and saw random drawings of soldiers. She looked at him to which Sun Ce sheepishly smiled.
"W-what? I was bored." She looked at him with her brown eyes, a strange kind of wisdom was in it. She smiled," I knew you weren't studying."
Sun Ce stared at her with disbelief, "What, do you think I can't study?" His wife nodded," Yes, I know you too well. You might fall asleep when you see a book!"
Sun Ce suddenly felt anger when he heard Da Qiao laugh. He grabbed her wrists and pulled her to the ground.
"W-What?! Sun Ce, what are you doing?" She was on the floor, she felt the warmth of her husband. Sun Ce saw her shocked face and laughed," Hahahaha! Wow! You are so easy to fool you know!"
Da Qiao's face flushed.'I-I am not!" But her face proved it all. They both stared at one another with peaceful silence.
She saw her husband's face so many times, but not like this, not this close up. She blushed, 'I'm so nervous.....wait why am I acting like this? I'm his wife! I mean.....'
Sun Ce closed his eyes and inched closer to her face. They kissed. She felt his arms go around her waist. 'Way too much! Too much! I can't handle it!'
She blushed more as she kissed him back. CLACK! They quickly looked up only to see Sun Shang Xiang looking at them in shock and embarrassment.
"I-I dropped some scrolls." She was telling the truth, she did drop some scrolls. "I-I'm so sorry! I didn't mean too! Honest! I-I was!"
Her red hair was in her eyes as she tried to stop her face from blushing.
Sun Ce got up and waved his hand in the air," It's alright sis. Sorry you had to see that." He helped Da Qiao up to her feet. "Yes, I'm really sorry about that!" She bowed to the shocked woman.
Big footsteps were heard in the room as the father of the household came in. "What's everyone doing in here?" Sun Jian looked at his children in curiosity.
"N-nothing!" Sun Shang Xiang blushed and quickly went out of there. He then looked at his eldest son and his wife. "You guys weren't......."
Their eyes widened when they out found the idea that the father came up with. "N-no! We weren't doing that!" "Oh no! We weren't doing anything like that! Honest!" Sun Jian smiled," Are you guys sure?" They nodded furiously.
"All right then. Carry to whatever you guys were doing then." He walked off to the kitchen to get something to eat.
They both looked at each other blushing,"Let's not do that again, okay?" Da Qiao asked him firmly. He nodded," Yeah, I try not too. Ouch! I won't do anything like that again."
He rubbed his arm in pain where Da Qiao hit him. "Ouch." He smiled as he watched his wife walk off.
"Heh." He went to his desk, finishing up his drawing of soldiers.
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Post by Hay-Lin on Oct 8, 2008 22:18:21 GMT -6
Yeah I love that pairing! No offense to people who don't. Sorry.....anyways, people!
Write! Let your imaginations soar!
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Post by Su Lu Pi on Oct 9, 2008 14:22:20 GMT -6
ile do some thing later may be a war dogs thing i know you all hate rules but wer ongly trying to make the place run smooooove like
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Post by Lu Bu on Oct 9, 2008 18:11:39 GMT -6
lol xD wow this is good
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Post by Hay-Lin on Oct 9, 2008 19:16:37 GMT -6
Hahaha! Thanks! You can write one if you want! I would love to read your stories!
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Post by Lu Bu on Oct 9, 2008 19:18:24 GMT -6
Hmm I am a beginer at it but I will think of something soon
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Post by Hay-Lin on Oct 9, 2008 19:20:52 GMT -6
Okay! Thanks!
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Post by Guan Yu on Oct 10, 2008 7:28:46 GMT -6
This one is one that i thought up for one of my created characters....my first created character actually.
Genre: Romance/Action adventure Rated: whatever....not sure on this one....just know it's not vulgar Title: The Saga of Yue Qiao
A Tragic Beginning:
It was the day of Yue Qiao's 18th birthday, her father, Yue Nan,was supposed to wake her up and spend the rest of the day with her. Instead, she was awoken by the palace guards.
"Our Lady.....Our Lady you must get up!" said the head guard.
She jolted out of her magnificently adorned bed. She looked around. The guards faces and silence told her the news themselves.
"Where is my father....and my sister?" She asked.
"My lady...yo-your father...was poisoned by your servant Feng Xain...your sister is safe with the other palace guards."
Yue Qiao's world was crushed. She dropped to her knees, sobbing. The guards quickly rushed her out of the palace to get her away from any possible people that were following Feng Xian's example. Yue Qiao swore revenge on Feng Xian. She trained hard everyday and built up a group of Elite soldiers. Her sister Yue Ren trained as well, but her training was in the scouting fields.
IT was now about a year later. Yue Qiao had now taken her father's place as the head guard of the Palace at Luo Yang. She had built up a following of about 40 men, all exceptionaly killed in their crafts. She lead a search party along with her sister. They serached the entire country for Feng Xian, whom had slipped out just before getting nabbed by the guards. Yue Qiao came upon Feng Xian in a valley in the Jing province. He was sitting among 10 other people. Yue Qiao stationed her men with twenty equipped with bows on either side of the valley. She herself went to the base of the valley. She wanted the task of killing Feng Xian. She made the signal for the archers to release their arrows. A rain of arrows crashed upon the unit in the bottom of the valley. Yue Qiao walked up to Feng Xian slowly. He backed up and tripped over a fallen follower. Laying on his back, he started to beg for his life. Yue Qiao, without a word, brought her sword down into the neck of Feng Xian. Her life, as a warrior, had just begun.
I will continue with this story at a later time...gotta get to class soon.
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Post by Hay-Lin on Oct 10, 2008 12:13:32 GMT -6
That is awesome! Hahaha! Cool! She sound like a kick-butt girl!
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